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With the improvemengt of English position,the most of studengts in China have neglect Chinese that is my local languages in recengt years.Some gradutes almostly can writen a passage of filiing their emotion. And the other who known a little something about traditional Chinese. As we all known ,there are many reasons that generate it.So I want to list something.On one hand,many universities have not focused on study of traditional Chinese but focus on their future careers.And the other hand ,many studengts spend their spare time in playing computer games and making girl friends.Hence they have not time to read excelent passsage and learned the knowledged of ancient poemts. If we want to deal with the issue, we had not better take some mesures to improve it.Firstly,many universities should encourage graduates reading more traditional passages.Secongdly,many organizationgs in studengt can host some activities about Chinese and culture.Last but not least,we should realize that Chinese is important to our future job and life.