To what extent do you agree or disagree?
注意:这道题不要泛泛地写媒体的优劣势,而应集中在influence what people think is important.
提纲:
Negative:Manipulation of the mass in politics, consumption, value change
positive:1.Call for national action for public interest 2.Promote awareness of some important issues
文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章词汇丰富度较好,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Nowadays there are all kinds advertisements broadcasting on internet, TV, radio and so on. They are influence people's life in some way. Some arguing that advertising now affect what people think and have negative impact on people's life. Well good advertising has positive impact on people's life, it may rise the awareness to help people get on a health lifestyle. it encourages people to go out and breathe the fresh air. it helps peple to realise that in order to gain a healthier body, one should balance physical activites and be on a diet. This kind of advertising not just make people to think but also make them to work on. While there is other kind of advertising which it only shows the best side of its products. People who have a pliable mind might easily been infulented by them, and make decisions rationally and buy things they may not needed. With this kind of advertising people should have more control of themselves and know what they really want.