调查结果:
1、大多数向同学、朋友说(理由:年龄相仿,容易交流和理解)
2、一些向老师、家长说(理由:经验丰富、可以得到帮助)
请你根据中文提示用英语给某报社编辑写一封信(信的开头与结尾已经给出),说明情况并提出你自己的观点。字数60-80词左右,不必逐句翻译,可适当发挥。
Dear Editor,
I am a Grade 9 student. Recently we have made a survey ----”To whom do you go when in trouble?” Here are the results.作者词汇量偏少,不过单词拼写方面做的不错;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。
Most of people can tell their schoolmates or friends when they have trouble.They have a lot of same experience in their lives.it is convenient for them to communicate .Many students will ask from their teachers or their parents for help if they are in trouble .Teachers coulde help them in study、making friends ,parents could give some general knowledge in lives.A little of them deal with affairs by themself.Some times ,they have trouble to communicate with others . I support them who ask help from their teachers and parents,because they have a lot of knowledge we cann't get now .We could get an excellent result with their help.
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