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新目标(Go for it)版初中英语九年级-Uint5 单元测试写作:有烦恼向谁说?

发布时间:2013-06-26 18:03浏览次数:4632
要求:
提示:假如你叫王平,参加了学校的”有烦恼向谁说?”的调查活动(a survey)。


调查结果:

1、大多数向同学、朋友说(理由:年龄相仿,容易交流和理解)

2、一些向老师、家长说(理由:经验丰富、可以得到帮助)
3、少数自己独立解决(理由:不愿与人交流,难以与人相处)


请你根据中文提示用英语给某报社编辑写一封信(信的开头与结尾已经给出),说明情况并提出你自己的观点。字数60-80词左右,不必逐句翻译,可适当发挥。


Dear Editor,

I am a Grade 9 student. Recently we have made a survey ----”To whom do you go when in trouble?” Here are the results.
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Yours Sincerely,
                                                                  Wang Ping
用户的作文(系统评分58.0分
评语:

作者词汇量偏少,不过单词拼写方面做的不错;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Most of people can tell their schoolmates or friends when they have trouble.They have a lot of same experience in their lives.it is convenient for them to communicate .Many students will ask from their teachers or their parents for help if they are in trouble .Teachers coulde help them in study、making friends ,parents could give some general knowledge in lives.A little of them deal with affairs by themself.Some times ,they have trouble to communicate with others . I support them who ask help from their teachers and parents,because they have a lot of knowledge we cann't get now .We could get an excellent result with their help.

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