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2007年6月英语六级作文真题:学雷锋

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:47浏览次数:1092
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Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed 
1.有的人认为应该有回报 
2.另外的人认为应该象雷锋一样不要回报 
3.我的看法 
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作者词汇量偏少,不过单词拼写方面做的不错;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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Have you done a good deed which is helpful to others? Have you expected to get a reward from who you helped. No matter what you answer is, the public have a arguement whether one should expect a reward when doing a good deed. Many people believed that a reward should be expected when doing a good deed. Beause if someone always help others without any reward, he may be tired to do more good deeds. A reward also can let people feel the meaningful of doing good deeds, and it is a motivate to encourage people go on doing good deeds. However, many opposites insist that one should not expect a reward when doing good deeds. Getting a reward, people will be thought that doing good deeds are not their really purpose. What we should do is learning from LeiFeng who do not expect a reward when doing good deeds. In my opinion, doing the good deeds is the most important things no matter whether we will get a reward.

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