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Have you done a good deed which is helpful to others? Have you expected to get a reward from who you helped. No matter what you answer is, the public have a arguement whether one should expect a reward when doing a good deed. Many people believed that a reward should be expected when doing a good deed. Beause if someone always help others without any reward, he may be tired to do more good deeds. A reward also can let people feel the meaningful of doing good deeds, and it is a motivate to encourage people go on doing good deeds. However, many opposites insist that one should not expect a reward when doing good deeds. Getting a reward, people will be thought that doing good deeds are not their really purpose. What we should do is learning from LeiFeng who do not expect a reward when doing good deeds. In my opinion, doing the good deeds is the most important things no matter whether we will get a reward.