2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；复杂句采用很棒；作者在学术词汇方面要多下功夫，有些单词拼错了。

With the development of technology, computers have swallowed into almost everyone's house,which also help people a lot in many files- study, work and life,especially in some dagerous and unhealth stuations. Computers seem like a wonderful friend, to students like us, we can check informations from Internt instead of look through uncount books, which saves our vulebal time, improve affection of learning. For workers, computers can do them a favor to do the boring things. After school or work, we can play games,listen songs, cheat with friends ,go shopping with computers. while, computers are not perfect, sometimes it may bring problems, some students don't know how to communacte with people face to face just because they are addicated in the ivisible world. others play computer games day and night, which not only is bad for their health but also impact thier normal life. From above, computer can be a good friend and teacher,if we make a full use of it, but, it also can be a trap and enemy if we can't control ourselves.