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作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。
The table chart given above reveals the statistics of accidents in a Chinese city. 608 accidents are caused by drivers turning left without due care, ranking first, and it increased by 10% over 2004. The number of accidents caused by drivers driving under the influence of alcohol is 208, and it increased rapidly by 15%. The table chart informs us of the phenomenon that accidents are mainly caused by drivers turning left without due care and accidents caused by drivers driving under the influence of alcohol is rising dramatically. What exactly contribute to this phenomenon ? Reasons can be listed as follows: for one thing, accidents caused by turning left without due care can be attributed to the absence of people¡¯s consciousness of driving security. In terms of the causing factor of alcohol, the reason why people often drive after drinking is that laws and regulations might not have been strictly enforced to warn people not to do this. Due attention should be paid to this phenomenon before things get worse. The authorities should impose a heavy penalty on those who drive after drinking. Moreover, a large-scale education campaign should be launched to inform the public of the significance of driving security. Only in this way can we reduce the accident rates.