2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowdays more and more peoples got lazy. they don't like go shopping.what's more prefer to staying at home.now with social developing more and more people likes buy things on the internet.beccuse people thing that is easy and simply. buy things on the internet is well but it have a lots of dangers.such as quantity. have many people buy tings is not the same as with picture and feeling is badly . buy tings on the internet is have good and bad ,