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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4562
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分61.5分
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作者应适量增加从句的使用量;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

As we all known, the interpersonal communication is the one of the most important skills in our life.Becase we are comunicating with others all the time in different places. First of all,we must improve our communication skill if we want to ear more money and have a good quality life.We must express our idears by talking and let our boss know our thing about our working,only in this way can our boss know our abillity .What's more ,we have to talk with other peaple to make good friends.Sometimes,we should express our fellings for each other when we are living with our friends,and we need to know the thinking of firends,all of these need use the way of interpersonal communication. Last but the most important everone's life need talking , we need singing,drain,and so on.It's imporsible we live lonely,our life is wonderful and colorful. All in all ,we need interpersonal communication and we need practice the skills of communicating,if we want a better life.

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