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2006年专四作文真题:存钱

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:27浏览次数:1977
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题目 My Idea of Saving Money
说明 Recently a Beijing information company did a survey of student life among more than 700 students in Beijing, Guangzhou, Xi'an Chengdu, Shanghai, Wuhan, Nanjing, and Shenyang. The results have shown that 67 percent of students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrow's money today is better, what do you think?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
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文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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My Idea of Saving Money There is a saying that "Money is a good servant, Not a good master." l think it's a good expound about money.Maybe money is not allthing but we can't do anything without money.So money is a indispensable thing in our life. But nowadays so many people have no correct way to use money.Some individuals think we should use our money reasonable, so we should save it at ordinary times,but othefs deem that using tomorrow's money today is better. In my opinion,I give my vote to the former opinion. Because I think we should do a smart consumer.The way we use tomorrow's money is irrational we must know if we form this habit. we will hardly to change it, we will run behind our expenses it will cause a bad influence.

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