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My Idea of Saving Money There is a saying that "Money is a good servant, Not a good master." l think it's a good expound about money.Maybe money is not allthing but we can't do anything without money.So money is a indispensable thing in our life. But nowadays so many people have no correct way to use money.Some individuals think we should use our money reasonable, so we should save it at ordinary times,but othefs deem that using tomorrow's money today is better. In my opinion,I give my vote to the former opinion. Because I think we should do a smart consumer.The way we use tomorrow's money is irrational we must know if we form this habit. we will hardly to change it, we will run behind our expenses it will cause a bad influence.