2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping Online Shopping is very popular in modern society. Majority of us often do shopping on line. It is easy. you just need choice what you want through Internet and then buy it through click mouse. But online shopping also have some bad sides for us. For example, the production maybe not as good as the picture on Internet or it is damaged when travel it. And people often be treated with many untrue website. online shopping improve our life. It is good for our society. But we also need to solve many problems of it. I hope we will have a better life through online shopping.