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2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:36浏览次数:1942
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 

1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重 

2.浪费的危害

3.杜绝浪费, 从我做起 

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评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

Reduce waste on campus With the increasing of living standard,people's life is getting better and better. As a result,waste can be seen universally on campus,which do harm to their health. Many ways can contribute to solving this serious problem,but the following ones may be most effective. Above all,waste should be paid more attention by each student and take some measures to reduce the flow of waste. Another way to handle with the problem of waste is to instruct them how to economic food,for what they have now are dependent on their parents.Eventually,those who waste food should be published so that they know the important of food. These are not the best and the only three ways we can take. But it should be noted that if the school takes some actions to solve this problem,then there are more food can supply for the poor area. In this way all of us will be free of hungry.

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