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GRE写作Argument模拟题10:the West Egg landfill

发布时间:2013-07-11 15:11浏览次数:1082
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Directions: Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument.

The following appeared in a memo from the mayor of the town of West Egg.

“Two years ago, our consultants predicted that West Egg's landfill, which is used for garbage disposal, would be completely filled within five years. During the past two years, however, town residents have been recycling twice as much aluminum and paper as they did in previous years. Next month the amount of material recycled should further increase, since charges for garbage pickup will double. Furthermore, over ninety percent of the respondents to a recent survey said that they would do more recycling in the future. Because of our residents' strong commitment to recycling, the available space in our landfill should last for considerably longer than predicted.”

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