2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者词汇基础扎实；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。

The development of technology can be a double-edged sword. This issue raises a dilemma. On one hand, we enjoyed the convenience brought by computer. On the other hand, this super instrument makes everything so cheaply available that many people have caught the computer-dependence disease. Some people claim that computer, as the fruit of humen progress, should service for man. We can use computers to process the data,shopping online, receive distance education...With a computer, almost everything in our life would become easier. However, opponents argue that the computer-dependence disease has been destroying many adolescents' lives. They are obsessed by computer games, or just copy answers on the internet automatically, which has affected their academic performances seriously. As far as I am concerned, the relationship between computer and man can be manageable as long as we have enough self-control. All in all, do not be a slave but a master of the computer.