2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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If you ask parents what's the most important to them,the answer must be the children.As we all know ,parents are the only one who treat us good unselfishly and don't ask payback. Espesialy in China,parents almost do everything for children ,including usual life.Even the children have the ability to do it by themselves. For example,the parents will buy all the things that life need for their children who has been a university student,which cannot make the children be independent. In my opinion,parents should 't have done everything for the children.On the contrary,they are supposed to let the children do something alone.Let them do chores,such as washing clothes,cleanling the floor.It is parents' duty to help children to be independent.