2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；可适当增加从句使用，注意极个别句子错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

On Excessive Packaging As we are shopping in the center,we can see many things on sale are so beautiful and colorful .In other words,they are over packed. But how could they be this?Mostly because those things are sent as gifts,with such a nice gift,we can feel satisfied and proud.And the businessmen make full use of this kind of feelings so that things are becoming moreover weight. As for me,I think it is useless to do that.If we want to send gift to someone,it is you sincere heat on the gift matters not the overlook .Our world has been hurt so mach,we should not waste so much resources any more.Thus we should appeal to everyone to stop producing and buying those things on excessive packaging.