题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者用词生动多样,学术词汇使用比较准确,但有少数拼写错误;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
As the contemporary society develop dramatically, a worrying problem has sprung up that the drgree of trust among individuals has been decreasing. For example, when we meet a man begging for money, we are considering weather his is treating us. Plus, in the business, we consumers are hard to believe what those merchats has guaranteed. All these phenomena mentioned above would be reduced to adverse consequences. Influenced by the issue, we, invariably, become increasingly cautious about others' guarantee, even a piece of word. Thus, this trend dose much harm to the commodity ecomomy. The underlying reason for this issue is that current people failed to trust each other, so keeping trust counts most, because the foundation of any relationship, whether it is with a business associate, spouse, parent, client or intimate friend, is trust. Trust is not something that can be built with quick fix techniques. Rather, it is something that is cultivated through consistent habits in personal interactions.