2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；简单句偏多，注意文中句子的错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段。

Nothing succeeds without a strong will.If you want to be succeed that you have to do anything with strong persistent.For example,you want to be good at English that you have to study English everyday and no disconnect.Do not think it will be easy without you have no try.In fact,you insist to study English everyday is difficult even though just learn five words.Because there is always have something influence you not to want to insist it.Such as,you have worked hard all day and you are tired.Because insist to do something is very difficult.So these succeed people is that who have a strong will to do one thing.One have a strong will that is the most important reason to reach a big goal.As for students,who do not study hard and will not to be a useful person.