2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；如若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；副词使用偏多。

The Impact of the Internet on interpersonal Communication As the contemporary society develops dramatically, interpersonal communication are becoming more and more convenient due to the internet. However, the impact of the internet on personal communication is just like a double-edged sword. For example, we may have hundreds of friends on facebook and are chatting with them passionately, but when come back to real life, we still involuntarily feel tired and vain. In fact, interpersonal relationship is not something permanently easy. Rather, it requires common experiences and consistent sincerity. How can an individual have a friendship-and-true with merely virtual, illusory and vulnerable contact that could disappear at anytime? The future of internet is promising. With the help of it, strangers can be brought together from a thousand miles away. Anyway, to stop eating for the fear of choking is truly not a very good idea.