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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4562
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
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文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

With the fastest speed of development, a increasingly number of person use internet. Accompanying with the growth of use rate, a issue has been put into spotlight. The impact of the internet on the interpersonal communication. Indeed, as far as i am concerned, balancing the advantages and disadvantages is of great importance for us. On one hand , the internet offer us more and more opportunity to know and understand the strangers from all over the world. It can also connect us with globalization so as to be a "earth country". Furthermore, our vision can also be broaden . On the other hand, there are,However, also weakness resulting in the worsen situation between relatives and friends. Nevertheless, the characteristics can be converted from out-going into the quiet. Therefore, we should pay great attention to the situation .

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