小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My friend is a beautiful gial,she is 13years old she likesdanciing.we always play together we like eatting playing singing we aer the best friends inthe world i fell very happpy to tell her i love her very muchMy friend is a beautiful gial,she is 13years old she likesdanciing.we always play together