2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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We all know there is something about Computer and Man.computers are prevailing among the poeple's life.it almost appear to everywhere,can do every thing.there is no doubt that we can't leave the computer.sometimes we think about computer is the clever than poeple,or less than.on the one hand,computer can do a thing which is complex.such as counting formulate.is faster than human. after all,the computer were made of human being,people made computer.