2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；采用了一些简单的从句；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。

we all kown that computer is more and more important for human. so have some one said, ' if i have no computer ,i will died.' do yo think it is good or bad ? of course ,bad. computer can give us benifit for us ,also have some bad things. in the one hand, computer make our life more convenient. such as ,we couldn't shop go to street, we only need a computer and internet we can buy that we want throught the computer. working and studying on line .our stip become faster. besides it also have disadvanteges. there are many trobules,like many student are addicted to playing games on line ,and then they dont go to school；people who are chat on line and then be deceived dy others. so we should know that computer is a rapier, make it useful and do the most benifits for us .