2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达较恰当，学术词汇表达灵活；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

An old saying goes that the real danger is not that the computer will begin to think like man,but man will begin to think like the computer.What can we learn from it ？ Nowadays,the computer improves sharpenly with the development of technology.Computers equipped with artificial intelligence become more and more smart from which people can benefit.The using of computer which can solve many problems easier than people make our life more comfortable. Under no circumstance could we ignore the negative impacts on using computer.For one thing ,people reliance on computer decrease the times of their considering,which is harmful to their creativity.For another ,people often turn to computer for everything is bad for their development .lt is a burden for people to develop independence. What l want to stress is that we should use computer in a correct way.Only by this can we have a better life.