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How should parents help children to be independent? It is common that parents prepared everything for their children. Every parent want their children could have a great future, and they can do everything for their children. But this isn't good at their children. Their children need to be independent. Everyone will get independent. Parents should do something to help their children to be independent. Here are some methods that they may take: one is let their children choose what they want to do in the future. the other is give them more free time to be alone. Besides, there are have many effective methods. You can take the best one according your addition. Be independent is important for children' future. Parents should take care of it. Choose the best way help your children.
