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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
With the development of science and technology, the computer is becoming more and more popular. People can do many things through Internet. However, the Internet has been the focus of People's Daily argument. Many people think the Internet is well, they can learning,reading and listening english on the internet. They can hunting for the solution when them run into a difficult problem. At the same time, they think working efficiently through the Internet. But some people have a different view. The internet exist a lot of bad things to children. Such as bad information, online games and network fictions. It's easy that lead to child addiction to internet, thus have influence for child study. In my opinion, I think it necessary to internet. People can reduce stress through listen music and see a movie on internet, but also need to limit times of surf the internet to children.
