拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
With the development of science and technology, the computer is becoming more and more popular. People can do many things through Internet. However, the Internet has been the focus of People's Daily argument. Many people think the Internet is well, they can learning,reading and listening english on the internet. They can hunting for the solution when them run into a difficult problem. At the same time, they think working efficiently through the Internet. But some people have a different view. The internet has a lot of bad things to the children. Such as bad information, online games and network fictions.This could easily lead to children addicted to the Internet, which affect their learning. In my opinion, I think it necessary to internet. People can reduce stress through listen music and see a movie on internet, but also need to limit times of surf the internet to children.