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nowdays , the environment around us is geting worse and worse.such as people cut down many trees ,and throw away rubbish everywhere , many factries pour dity and polluted water into revier or sea. in datiy life, we don't throw away rubbish everywhere, also we can use shopping when we shoppoing and so on. if everyone pays more attention to our environment, i belive that will less pollution and will be better
