2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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On Excessive Packaging Now, there are lots of protects are very beautiful ,Because more and more goods have a situation that they had on excessive packaging.Maybe the goods are not very well,but by the package ,they look like perfect and have high quality Thanks to people pay more attition to the protect's beauty not quality and useful。So the maker start excessive package in the goods,but the people didn't realize this question's serious,more and more goods had excessive packaged. In my opinion,excessive package is a cig problem.We should decline this bad situation and don't go to buy any excessive package goods.I think if we together decline it,this situation will be okay!