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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是学术词汇使用较恰当;全文结构较为严谨;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

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Recent years, have been a tendency that computers swarming into every household, Hardly can citizens live without a computer. But two decades ago, There are few residents recognise how to use a computer. which is not a necessity to person.There are a number of factors accounting for this phenomenon. One of the most common factors is that people would rather use computers for talking ,listening,and so on. it becomes a habit to them. The computers are convenient for us is also responsible for the problem,which can instead of us to do many things .Another contributing factor is the development of technology bring us into a new information ear. We can not assert whether this trend is good or not,for my own part,I bear no prejudices against it like some critics did. But it is advisable to give a correct guidance to the whole some development of computers appropriately be used.

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