题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;请注意分段。
Recently the problem of trust has been brought into focus and it has become a problem we have to face.Now we should do our utmost in believing in others.Why have there been so many distrust?Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is many companies product bad goods,which make customs not trust them.Besides,we can't keep trust each other because of benefit and breaking their promises.The third one is