高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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In the past, my hometown surrounded by green trees is very beautiful.And a kind of fish play together in the clean river.The house is in poor condition as well the road is very narrow.So people lived in a hard life. But now, it changeed greatly.A great many high buildings ,factories and stories are in the hometown. There are also many cars in the street.With the industry developed, entertainment is becoming worse and worse.Therefor so many trees reduced and fish disappeared.It is time to take action to deal with pollution.I love my hometown.