2008年6月21日英语四级作文真题:互联网

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In the interent As we all know,the interent is more and more useful.And people have many different views about it.some people think it can help they learn more and get more efficient.But some penple don't think so,they think the interent may make young people drop into the interent day and night.it will effect they study. In my eyes,i think the interent is benfit and also unbenfit.it just depend on yourself.if you spend a lot of time playing games,maybe it is unbenfit for you.one the other hand,if you use it to study,it will benfit for you.