高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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my hometown Long before, my hometown is a beautiful village. You can see the trees aroud the village and the river is so clean and flash, even you can see the flishs in the river. People were happy althought they lived in the small houses. But now, it was changed. There are many buildings and cars in the village, we can't see the green trees and flishs now. Just see the factories in the village, and the pullute are so havey. Please save our village, manage environment is our business.