2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Computer And Man Now,many people use computer.And computer have become a hot topic.In my opinion ,we should deal with computer and man relation. Firstly,computer is very useful on our life.we can look for information what we need ,also we can use computer for learning .If teacher teach you in class but you still do not know,you can use computer well.Secondly, many people are addicted into computer but not get along well with family or friends,so i think we should not cost much time on computer.Afterall,computer will eat up much time on our life.Finally,men is very clever,they can do everything if they can use their brain well,including invent computer and so on. As far as i am concerned,wo should deal with computer and man's connect.If we make them in a proper way ,our life will colorful.