2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

As the saying goes“Constant dropping wears the stone." Is the water has a strong will that it wears the stone.As our human being,we can achieve all our ambitions with a strong will. A strong will is an important pledge that can lead us to succeed.Everyone of us wants to be the successful one,but not all of us can achieve our goal eventually for the reason we give up easily.Therefore,it is significant for us to hold a strong will when we meet difficulties. I firmly believed that people who have a strong will can complete the great mission.Let's give Edison as an example,if Edison won't had a strong will and gave up easily when he failed in inventing,we still living in a darkness world. So do our students,if we didn't study hard,we can't be the person we want to be,and we succeed nothing.Only we hold a strong will did we make great contributions to ourselves and the society.