题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;请注意分段。
Trust is crucial and indispensable in maintaining a relationship.Without trust,we can't get along well with other people,let alone cooperate with them or get help from them.People are social animals.Without interaction with other people,life would be dull and meaningless.In my opinion,some factors play a primary role in it. First comes honesty,There's an old saying in Chinese:Once bitten,twice shy.Thus,never lie to your partners.If they find out you're lying or cheating,the existing trust will be broken.Once broken,it's always hard to rebuild it.