题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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On maintaining trust Nowadays, with the development of the finance industry , the relationship of people is becoming more and more isolated. Meanwhile, if you find someone fall on the road, you will not help her, that because of the bad social relationship. so, now we don't trust anyone outside we 're friends and parents. But,what cause this phenomenon? Firstly, now, we have lots electronic apprates to enjoy the spare time, so more and more people lacks to the community inspire . Secondly, every family has only one child, they give the best to his, so the child will always ignore others.Thirdly, people is much complex, sometime we can not know about others, and they maybe do some things hurt us, so we will not trust them. In all , trust is two face. what we can do just do myself. As far as i see, the key to maintaining trust is to try to trust others.