拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句。
With the medical developed,many illness can be controlled and cured.A normal person will still live at the age of 120.Although there will be more and more people live on our planet,maybe there will have other organisms live with us. At the same time,we will have many new power for using,the pollution we had made can be dominated.But we should also protect our environment,it just because it is our home. What is more,our life have a really big change.For instance,we have the robots do all kinds of housework,our chairs will follow the color of our clothes to change themselves.And we can put our phones on our arms,we can see each other on it when we are phoning,we can take the new lift to the space for vacation and so on!