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With the development of the science and technology,there is many negative effect on plants and animal species.So many people argue with this problem.One of them say that it is too late to protect the environment.However,nothing is late.If we can try our best to reduce the pollution which we made,the environment will be better in the future. The other people think it is not to late.This view which i agree with,because it is everone's world,everyone has duty to guard it.In my opinion,we can do a lot of things.The easy one is the goverment does some propaganda,it is easy and useful.Have more lecture about how to protect our environment no matter in office or school.Everyone should pay more attention to our circumstance.
