题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;请注意分段。
Trust is crucial and indispensable in maintaining a relationship.Without trust,we can't get along well with other people,let alone cooperate with them or get help from them.People are social animals.Without interaction with other people,life would be dull and meaningless.In my opinion,some factors play a primary role in it. First comes honesty,There's an old saying in Chinese:Once bitten,twice shy.Thus,never lie to your partners.If they find out you're lying or cheating,the existing trust will be broken.Once broken,it's always hard to rebuild it.Promising-keeping is the second one.If you always break your promise,you will not be trusted by others any more.