福建仙游县承璜第二学校2012-2013学年八年级上学期期末试卷作文试题

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Now many students like eating fast food such as hamburger,fried potato,fried chicken and so on.But the fast food is bad for our health and we are easy getting overweight if we often eat fast food.So good eating habits and healthy eating habits are very important.We shouldn't eat fast food often.