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Heath is important in our life.Now many students like eating fast food such as hamburger,fried potato,fried chicken and so on.They're very delicious.But it is bad for our health and we will become overweight if we often eat fast food.So we shouldn't eat fast food often.Good eating habits and healthy eating habits are very important.