题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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Trust is crucial and indispensable in maintaining a relationship.Without trust,we can't get along well with other people,let alone cooperate with them or get help from them.People are social animals.Without interaction with other people,life would be dull and meaningless.In my opinion,some factors play a primary role in it. First comes honesty,There's an old saying in Chinese:Once bitten,twice shy.Thus,never lie to your partners.If they find out you're lying or cheating,the existing trust will be broken.Once broken,it's always hard to rebuild it.Promising-keeping is the second one.If you always break your promise,you will not be trusted by others any more.Another important aspect is attitude.