福建仙游县承璜第二学校2012-2013学年八年级上学期期末试卷作文试题

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Good healthy eating is important in our life.Now a great number of students like eating fast food such as hamburger,fried potatoes,fried chicken and so on.They're very delicious.But it is bad for our health and we will become overweight if we often eat fast food.So we shouldn't eat fast food often.And we should have food eating habits and healthy eating habits are very important.