福建仙游县承璜第二学校2012-2013学年八年级上学期期末试卷作文试题

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Healthy life habits is very important to us.First,we should have healthy eating habits,for example we shouldn't eat fast food often and we should eat vegetable more often.Second,we should go to bed early and get up early.Finally,we should take part in some sports to build us up and make us strong.