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How to deal with the relation between human beings and nature is growing more and more attentions from scientists and many countries' leaders. We have to rely on the nature and we can construct the environment the same. Well-controlled is good for us to get the benefits from the earth. First of all, whether the air circumstance is fresh or not is advantaged for human health. We conclude we should plant trees as many as we can. Trees keep us from the pollution as well. Second，chemistry gas and fluid sometimes are bad for lives and are poison materials. Science experiments lead the developing but destroyed the lives circumstances. We had better consider it clearly and get the balance. Make sure if it is necessary. Third, animal species are valuable kinds. We should realize it is our responsibility to protect and cherish them. We can study these rare species and get good effect for humans. Just like the making of medicine. Above opinions are my thought to improve the relation. And I appeal every one should like the great nature.
