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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；从句使用量太少；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；连词使用偏少。
From: Hubin@163.com To: KPOHsales@hotmail.com Subjects: establish business relationship\ Dear sir.or Madam I knew your new product of 5670 during the exhibition held in New York on the date from Dec. 15th to 22nd.I was pretty interested in it.Please send us a price list and an instruction.Thank you for your cooperation ,and we all expect to establish business relationship with you . We are look forward to your earlier reply. Yours sincerely,
