2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；作者在学术词汇方面还有很大的空间，还要注意单词拼写；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

It's believed that the computer can do almost every thing. At the time when the computer was invented, scientists, carried away by its calculating speed, felt that they had created a miracal.It's gradually not only used in mathmatics,physics,chemistery and astonomic,but also in places like the library,hospital,military army to replace the work of human.For this reason, computer was entitled "Electronic Brain"in terms of appreciation. Can man be controled by computer?The answer is negative.Although a computer works much faster and accuratly than man, a fact is undeniable, it is designed ,manufactured and programmered by human.Of course, science fictions have made up many fascinating stories, or robot,which can conquered human and the earth ,even the whole university.But they are only the unrealistic imagination.A horse helped human a lot and run much faster than man, but it is only a slave. The future of the computer is very promising.With the help of it, human can do many things that could not be done before.Conquering the university,discovering new things ,explaining the mestories phenominent puzzing us are all made possible by the computer.