2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构不严谨。

Computer and Man With the development of the society ,more and more electric products were made.Time is elevating as well as the technology,especialy computers. As far as we known,the computer is important for us .We use them to communicate,to study ,to know something and so on.the computer take up our life as a neccesory role. Every coin has tow sides.The computer plays a important in our life ,however it take many problems bo us.Some people using computers to paly games or surf the Internet and so on,so that those people are addicted in computers.As a result,people forgot the advantages of the computer,but the disadvantages.On the other hand,something of the computer is bad for tenagers.they were led to a wrong way. How should we treat to computers?In my opinon,taking their advantages and avoid their disadvantages.