题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇;没有能够有效地使用连接词和过渡词;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化。
Computer and Man With the development of the society,more and more electric products were productded.Time is elevating as well as the technology,especially computers. As far as we known,the computer is important for us.We use them to communicate,to study ,to know something and so on.The computer takes up our life as a neccesory role. Every coin has two sides.The computer plays an important in our life ,however it take many problems bo us.Some people using computers to paly games or surf the Internet and so on,so that those people are addicted in computers.As a result,people take the advantages of the computer,but the disadvantages.On the other hand,something of the computer is bad for teenagers.they were led to a wrong way. How should we treat to computers?In my opinion,taking their advantages and avoid their disadvantages.